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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:14:50 GMT
((comp dated 7-29-2003))
To all my friends, Sorry this one took so long, guys, but I had to calm down for a bit after a tradgety. This is actually my second time typing it. The first time, I was three paragraphs -- THREE FRIGGIN' PARAGRAPHS -- away from finishing the second part to the story when I got up to stretch my legs. Some young little punk zipped into my seat, thinking that I was done with my 'puter and minimized my window so that he could chat with his girlfriend! When I got my seat back, I restored the window to its full size to see a blank message screen! Argh, I was sooo pissed! Anywho, let's get to the nitty-gritty. Feedback is appreciated, and so are any other messages you feel the need to send. So, without further ado, I give you the second installment of "The Final Gate". Enjoy! NOTE: Indents are represented by "`````". Sorry! :-` ------------------------------------------------------- The Final Gate Prologue Two, "Darkened Path, Reborn Rage" `````Jandar Darkheart stood tall on a high mountain bluff overlooking an unnamed seacoast during the steel-grey of predawn, the wind buffeting his face and tossing his hair about. Behind him sat Ja'Shin R'Hjod, Jandar's brother-in-arms and, quite possibly, his truest friend. Ja'Shin's eyes were closed in deep concentration, and his hands were clasped tightly in his lap, but a calm smile decorated his face. Jandar smirked darkly for a moment, then turned to the creeping light of morning. The two of them had always ventured out to this bluff whenever they could, a reminder that... `````Jandar's though was shattered when a deep red ball of light crested the rise, and Jandar's arms flew up in a vain effort to shield himself from the glow. Then he remembered that this was all an elaborate illusion sustained by Ja'Shin, and slowly slowly faced the "sun" with growing confidence. `````"Realistic, eh," Ja'Shin asked happily, shifting slightly in his seat, and Jandar could only nod. `````What Jandar was seeing was a recreation of the sunrise Ja'Shin had seen several hours before their appointed meeting. Being a vampire himself -- unwillingly, yes, but a fact he had to live with -- Jandar was unable to see the beauty contained within the daylight hours and relied on Ja'Shin to be his eyes. Ja'Shin used the opportunity to practice his magical lessons -- "show off" was a better phrase -- and remind Ja'Shin of his humanity, so that each gained something from the experience. Jandar also saw it as a test of willpower. The first few times, Jandar has run screaming and sometimes attacked Ja'Shin until his friend was able to subdue him. Jandar and Ja'Shin were equal in fighting abilities as long as both kept their heads, and there was no clear victor between a frenzying vampire and a startled Divarian. There were a few times that each had been seriously hurt during the early sessions. `````But with Ja'Shin's aid, Jandar had overcome the beast within, and incidents like that were few and far between. Jandar watched the "sunrise" until the illusionary golden disk was well above the horizon before turning to the other and sighing. `````"All right, Jas," he growled, trying to appear angry, "enough! I've got better things to do than watch you play." Ja'Shin opened his eyes and the illusion faded. The sun became the moon and day was consumed by night. `````"Especially today," Ja'Shin asked, the smile on his face only growing. `````Jandar nodded. "Yes. Especially today." `````This night held special meaning for Jandar, since it was this same night many years ago when Jandar's wife, Elizabeth, had mysteriously disappered. Jandar never spoke much of her, but when he did, Ja'Shin saw in his friend's face the faint hope that she would return. Ja'Shin had been away during those years when they were together, but thankfully had returned after her disappearance when Jandar was suicidal. Ja'Shin had a few physical -- and not so few mental -- scars from Jandar trying to hurt him enough so that Ja'Shin would leave him alone. Ja'Shin's resolve, devotion and talent had been one of the cornerstones of Jandar's recovery. `````Jandar and Ja'Shin walked in respectful silence along the coastline, up a woodland path, and ultimately to an abandoned cottage. Ja'Shin stopped several paces from the doorway, leaving his companion alone and devoted himself to keeping his friend protected during these proceedings. Jandar continued on, ducking under the decaying entryway and moving into, what used to be, the bedroom. Taking a blood-red rose from his cloak, he knelt, and placed it on the floor. Then he bowed his head and fell silent. After several moments, Jandar stood and walked out, nodding to Ja'Shin `````After the cottage was out of sight and Jandar's mood lifted, Ja'Shin looked at his companion and broke the silence. `````"So," he said tentatively, "how did it all happen? You two meeting, I mean. I never heard the whole story." `````"Not much to tell." Jandar's eyes grew distant as he recalled those now-painful memories. "You know how it goes, boy meets girl-" `````They had met in a tavern, of all places. He was looking for vampires to slay and she was a young woman in search of adventure. Jandar had word that one of the local lords was preying on villagers, especially women, and Elizabeth had been summoned by a lord to appear at his court. Jandar, never one to miss an opportunity, offered to be her bodyguard on the long, dark roads ahead. She accepted and their fates were sealed. `````"-boy falls in love with girl-" `````Unfortunately, Jandar never found hard evidence against the lord to pin him as a vampire, so he remained in town, accompanying Elizabeth every time she was summoned to appear before him. They grew close and, as it tends to, love began to blossom. `````"-boy marries girl-" `````After two years of observation, Jandar had found the hard evidence he needed, but he put the elimination of the vampire lord aside for making marriage plans. Finally, on a beautiful autumn day, they were joined. `````"-boy gets called away-" `````Their honeymoon was cut short when Jandar received word that a large vampire group was slowly moving westward. Jandar left immediately and vowed to return soon. `````"-boy returns to his beloved-" `````Jandar return to their cottage several months later to his wife, and after many hours of recounting events, they retired for the evening. `````"-boy and girl are happy-" `````She attacked him in the middle of the night, clawing at him with savage fury, her eyes more feral than loving. Jandar fought back, but Elizabeth had changed. She lifted him off of the ground as if he were a rag doll and cast him against the wall. With inhuman speed she was on him again, pinning him against the wall by his shoulders. She bared long fangs and snarled before darting for his neck. `````"-girl disappears in the night." `````Jandar fought on two fronts, one for consciousness and the other with himself. Should he slay the vampire, his enemy, and his wife, his love? His vision became blurred and his movements sluggish, the first sign of vampirism. Should he allow her to live and hope they can love in unlife? His mouth became dry and he felt unusually thirsty, the second sign. Jandar summoned up all of his strength and launched his attack, grabbing a stake from his belt, hanging nearby, and ramming it home into her heart. She convulsed once before exploding into a plume of dust. `````Jandar had saved his own life at the cost of another's, or so he thought. `````Ja'Shin saw the tension etched into Jandar's face and decided to let the issue drop. Having lost his love and his home in the Frontier War, Ja'Shin knew what Jandar was going through. Since the fall of the Hunter's Conclave, the Divarian was never his old self, and subject to bouts of severe depression. Whenever Ja'Shin and Jandar were together, they seemed to feel off of each other's pain, and somehow grew stronger. This happened only after a long bout of insults and bickering, and even a good melee. Neither injured the other past bruises and scratched due to the fact that both combatants were seasoned fighters and knew how to pull blows. However, since Ja'Shin was the only one armed and armored at the moment, any fighting that happened this day would be purely hand-to-hand. Ja'Shin couldn't help but snicker; it seemed as if their entire relationship was based on arguing and fighting. `````"What's so funny, Jas," Jandar muttered, elbowing his friend in the ribs. `````"Us." Ja'Shin noticed the smirk on Jandar's face and prepared himself for anything. "Look at us, Jan. Two old fools kicking around life like we own it. I feel downright useless nowadays with all of the young blood bouncing around, and you are useless; all dark and brooding about everything." `````"You're coming up on, what, you six thousandth birthday within the next few weeks?" `````"Bite me," Ja'Shin grinned. "I'm only five hundred." `````"Now that you mention it," Jandar said brightly, fangs elongating, "I am a bit hungry." `````Ja'Shin chuckled wryly and offered an arm. Jandar smacked it away quickly. Divarians had a natural defense against vampires; being magically-infused creatures, Divarian blood took to vampires like a dose of charcoal ingested by a human. Jandar's reaction to Ja'Shin's blood when they had first met had been mild, causing Jandar to retch for only an hour. The Divarian never quite understood how he was able to walk amongst the vampire population unmolested, but he always assumed that word got around. `````A deep-toned bell sang out thirteen times off to the south, and the two friends passed a confused look between them. `````"What was that," Ja'Shin growled. `````"The Bell of Vitae," Jandar replied glumly. "A signal to our kindred that a great danger is about the land. I need to go." `````"Right behind you." Ja'Shin was already glowing a sullen amber, a sign that he was about to use his magic. `````"No mortals, Jas." `````"Like hell I'm going to sit this one out! I got loyalties to uphold, ya know." Ja'Shin blurred into the form of a large white wolf and cast a daring look at Jandar before the golden aura faded. `````"No means no, Jas. True, the Bell calls for a truce among factions, but that does not mean that mortals are included. You may get hurt if you attend." `````"So? If they ask about me, say that I'm your snack for the proceedings." Jandar could only gag as he turned his path southward. `````The two arrived at the Temple of Midnight shortly after the Bell of Vitae chimed again. Ja'Shin and Jandar fell into the slow-moving train of bodies that wound down the north face of a mountain pass and ultimately into a long, snaking tunnel. As each vampire crossed the threshold of the tunnel, black tendrils of shadow encased each one in order to maintain anonymity. Within the Temple, all were equals and the veil of darkness denied any heated conversations from being taken outside to the physical level. Ja'Shin used his magic to draw the shadows about himself, as the form of a wolf made his muscles cramp up, and joined the mass flowing into the audience hall. `````The Temple of Midnight itself was a bowl of black marble into which tier upon tier had been carved At the base of the bowl, each Prince -- or Princess, as some Clans had -- sat on a small throne bearing the symbol of their faction on its back. In the center of the thrones was a high dais where the Speaker stood, a dark figure dressed in flowing, blood-red robes. As with tradition, the Speaker wore a white mask; its only distinguishing marks were the gaping, snake-like mouth with elongated fangs, and the inverted crimson triangles beneath each eyehole. As everyone was seated, the Speaker rapped a gnarled oak staff on the ground sharply, calling the group to order. `````"For centuries," the Speaker intoned, "we vampires have been secreting ourselves amongst the mortals, trying to maintain and empire forged many years before us. The goal of that empire has been nothing less than the total dominion over the mortals. For centuries, we vampires have played a game of chess; moving pawns forward and securing power in an attempt to reach that goal, and for centuries, we have failed. `````"This has been caused due to a growing amount of discord within the Clans. Some of our kind have been working alongside our prey, and there are those of us who actively seek out and destroy our brethren for revenge." A low rumble reverberated throughout the chamber as many vampires growled at that fact. `````"I feel your anger, my brothers and sisters, but I bear even graver news: a vampire hunter is slowly destroying us Clan by Clan." `````"Surely you can't be saying that a mere mortal is giving our kind enough trouble to require us here," one form called down. `````"Out of order," the Speaker mused, "but no less a valid question. True, were it a mortal, the Bell of Vitae would not have been sounded, but we are not dealing with a mortal. The floor will now recognize Lord Balzemier, one of the only ones of us to survive the Hunter's attacks. Lord Bazemier to the dais, please." `````A subtle murmur flowed through the Temple as a charred and mishappen form clad in a well-tailored suit mounted the dais. Prince Balzemier had been considered by many to have been a handsome, if not dashing, figure, but the creature that now stood next to the Speaker could only be called hideous at best. Balzemier stood hunched over slightly, his flesh crawling visibly as it worked to heal itself at an excellerated rate. His taloned hands hung weakly at his side, the nails long and twisted. Balzemier's face was frozen in a scowl of concentration, and as he spoke, his voice shifted between strained and tortured. `````"Fellow vampires," he began, scanning the room with his shrewd eyes, "indeed the thing that did this to me was no mere mortal. My attacker was a creature from beyond the Realm; a demonic killer that has no equal on this plane. Indeed, only through my luck and cunning was I able to survive."
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:15:31 GMT
`````"Whatever," someone yelled. "You probably were scared by a rabbit and stumbled into the sun. You're only calling this meeting to save your reputation and pride." `````"Perhaps," Balzemier admitted, stretching his hand toward the speaker. The unfortunate individual rose several feet from the ground, clutching his chest and writhing in pain. After a moment of high-pitched screaming, the floating vampire exploded in a shower of blood that flowed down into Balzemier's mouth. The body hit the floor with a final-sounding thump. "But then again, you will never know now, will you?" `````"Now," Balzemier said brightly, his body suddenly healthy again, "I trust that there will be no further interruptions? Good! Let's move on, shall we?" `````Balzemier paced about the dais for a moment. `````"This creature parades about this Realm as a human under the name of Zevyr Darim, and I assure you that he is no pushover. However, he hails from a shadowed reality that was beyond our reach until a few days ago. One of our number uncovered an artifact that would allow one of our kind to traverse the barrier between this reality and the next. Through our efforts, we have been able to duplicate the artifact. We intend to send three volunteers across the barrier to locate Zevyr and destroy him. I have been notified by Princess Alyianna of the Shadow family that Tiara Darkstone has already volunteered. I need two more brave...shall we say...souls to aid me." `````Ja'Shin nudged Jandar, and Jandar's hand shot up reluctantly. Balzemier nodded and called out for another. `````"Why me," Jandar muttered, glaring at Ja'Shin. `````"Simple, bro," Ja'Shin grinned. "Tia's my friend, but I can't go to help, as I'm no blood-sucker. That leaves you, ya lucky bum!" `````"You owe me big for this one, pleb!" `````"Deal. 'Sides, you're already picked, bud. Too bad I'm not a vampire, eh, Jan?" `````"I can fix that," Jandar growled darkly. `````"Drink?" Ja'Shin proffered his wrist yet again, but it was slapped away. `````"Shut up and go 'way!" `````"Anyway, something about his story doesn't ring true." `````"Oh?" Jandar turned his glare back to the other. `````"Just a hunch." Ja'Shin replied. `````"Next time you have a hunch, let me know so that I have ample time to beat you!" `````Ja'Shin chuckled and escorted Jandar down to the dais where Tiara and the other volunteer were waiting. `````Jandar and his companions mounted the dais, coming upon -- what Ja'Shin had aptly named -- "the Darkling family." Tiara Darkstone, a raven-haired woman of lithe, supple grace from beyond the Northern Reaches stood next to Ri'Ind Ti'Shan, her long-time lover and ex-Master of the Hunter's Conclave. As usual, she wore a loose-fitting, light brown bodice with a daring neckline and a snug pair of breeches of similar hue. About her waist sat a thick leather belt from which hung two strangely-curved daggers only slightly shorter than her forearms, like canine teeth of some fierce predator. A pair of smaller throwing daggers sat at the tops of her boots, ready to be used, and she absently maneuvered an ornate knife from finger to finger. Ri'Ind, swathed all in black seemed to watch everything at once and appeared to be Tiara's shadow given form. `````Beyond those two, Timber Darksbane conversed quietly with her husband, Dinin. Timber's warm smile was mirrored on her lover's face as they talked, if only more dark and sinister. Her deep red hair almost matched the color of Dinin's cloak, which was the hue of dried blood, and cascaded neatly down her back like a ruby waterfall. She was clad in a neat blue dress, which reflected off of her emerald eyes as would a sea at twilight. Like Tiara, she was armed with an ornate dagger that hung neatly at her side. As Jandar and his counterpart stepped into the ring of light, Dinin politely broke away from his chat and approached Ja'Shin. `````Darkheart, Darkstone, and Darksbane; a diverse group bearing a common root in name. With all assembled, the refreshed and restored Balzemier stepped from the shadows, flanked by the Speaker and another man who muttered to himself, nodding every now and then. The volunteers and their companions formed a semicircle in front of Balzemier as the Prince began to speak. His words were calm and his tone low, but an aire of command was nestled within. `````"Thank you all for accepting this dangerous, yet necessary task of eliminating this threat to our kind. Successful or not, your bravery will be remembered throughout history. `````"Now, to put aside the pleasantries, I have brought with me my brother," Balzemier motioned to the other man, who was still muttering, "Kenzir, to be your guide to and from the nether realm from which Zevyr hails. He can give you valuable information about customs, organizations, and the basic 'do's' and 'don'ts'" `````Balzemier hefted three talismans marked with alien glyphs and handed one to Jandar, Tiara and Timber. `````"These artifacts will endow you with the ability to traverse the barrier between our reality and his. However, once you pass through the Gate into the other reality, you must return to the same Gate in order to come up this reality again. Counter to that, you must only will yourself to cross from this reality to the other, regardless of location. We have yet to be able to explain it. `````"I have stated all that you need to know at this time. My Lord and Master has informed me of little more on this matter, so you are not the only ones in the dark, so to speak. Kenzir, you have your instructions. All of you are dismissed." `````Kenzir seemed to snap out of his trance and nodded to Balzemier. Without another word, Kenzir reached into the front of his black tunic and drew out a more battered version of the strange talisman -- most likely, Jandar thought, the original. Kenzir seemed to stretch out for a brief second before his form snapped together into a tight glowing line of hot crimson and dissolving. Concentrating on the talisman, Jandar felt a peculiar lurch before the world went black. `````When the last of the volunteers had vanished and their friends had left, Balzemier turned to the Speaker and grinned evilly. `````"So, Master Vanador," he crooned, "what do you think of it all?" `````"The hounds have been set loose. All that remains now is to see if they flush the prey or are taken by it. One way or another, my son, we shall have Zevyr'aluti'ba'darim, and three lives are a small trade." `````Balzemier nodded, a dark sneer climbing onto his face like a meniacle mask. "Well put, my master. Well put, indeed." ------------------------------------------------------- And thus ends another section to the vast tale that there is to tell. What further mysteries will be revealed next time? Alright, so I sound like a light-blasted soap opera with those lines, but oh well. Some have made the comment that this is very World of Darkness, and to that I only have this to say: it is my own creation, true as life and honest as rain. Since much of what goes on within the Tavern and other parts of the Realm are based on the WoD, I had to tread softly when writing this part of the story. The first prologue was mostly written from Zevyr's perspective, so the terminology was easy. Not so with this section. "Kindred" and other such references are nowadays associated with White Wolf that any other time you use it, someone always has to yell "plagiarist!" Comments and questions (even a suggestion or two) is always appreciated, and those who do not understand certain parts of the story, or would like to learn more need only say so. I see feedback as a way to refine my "art" and make it more enveloping. Also, I'd like to apologise if I did not represent your character correctly, did not dress him/her as you had, or armed them differently than you intended. One thing I did not regret changing is the typical Goth "black hair, pale-skined, wan-looking" vampire archtype. Too many of those out there have those traits and its uninvenive. For some it fits, others it doesn't. I have depicted the features of the characters as I have imagined them. If there are those that want to refresh my memory as to what the character is armed with or looks like, be my guest. To those who already have, I remember well, but may keep what is written. Until next time, kiddies! Jas P.S.: Just for fun (if it worked) I have included the Malaphim glyph that I whipped up for the RPG. If anyone would like to join up with me and help me create this, they are more than welcome to do so. I desperately need people I can trust, and writing a whole world down -- to the tiniest detail -- is rough, and setting it in order is tougher. Ciao!
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:16:27 GMT
Final gate pro I
To those whom have sent in thier permission to use their characters, here is the first installment of the story that I am working on based on characters from on-line sources; those people who have touched my life for better or for worse. A while back, I sat down with a few friends and tossed ideas for a role-playing system about with them. We constructed a vast world, in which this story is based. Although not all of it will be revealed within these pages, I hope to share a little of my mind and talent with some of my friends.
To those whom have yet to send in their response concerning this, read this and decide if I would represent your characters with the flare and awe that you have. I would like to note, however, that sometime in the future, I hope to be able to publish this story, as well as the RPG it was based on, and I trust that anything contained herein will not be used without my permission. Trust begets trust, and you have all earned mine... Please enjoy!
NOTE: Due to the lack of tab availability, I have had to think up something to indent so that the paragraphs won't blend together. If you see a `````, it indicates an indent. Sorry for the confusion. I know, it looks dumb, but :-p!
Jas
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The Final Gate
Prologue One-- "Zevyr"
`````Zevyr Darim tried vainly to claw his way out of sleep, but it dragged him back down easily...
`````He floated easily through the dark woodland of his homeland, running as silent as a wolf and not phased that the trees flew past his head at a blinding speed. It did however, shake his nerves a bit when he broke into a brightly lit glade and stared into the face of death.
`````The flurry of ebon wings announced the arrival of Zevyr's other half...
`````It had no name -- at least, none that Zevyr could think of -- but it stared at him with feral, serpentine eyes and it loomed over something human. Its mouth dropped open to reveal two rows of razor-sharp fangs and it hissed in an almost inviting manor before leaping at him, claws extended, and a sinuous voice flowed into his mind. `````~She could not walk the Vale. Can you?~
`````Zevyr muttered and turned in his sleep, but Father Night would not let go of such a vivid vision constructed by his servants, Dream and Illusion...
`````He floated over his own body, admiring the creature's handiwork in a detatched and stoic manner. Its head was in his chest like a pig gone to slop, his intestines flung aside during its search for more inviting organs. After -- what Zevyr assumed -- several hours, it looked up at him and uttered, "Why do you still linger here? Does Oblivion deny you Her sweet song? Or do you hear it and simply wish to remain?" `````The voice came not from the creature's mouth, as he might have expected, but from a cool azure glow that Zevyr never noticed before. Then his gaze was drawn to his right, where a thin thread trailed from his body to a swirling vortex of infinite blackness; and not just any blackness, but a shade of nothing that exceeded human comprehension. In contrast to the vortex, the thread seemed blinding, and Zevyr could only think of one word: anguish. The kind of pain when finding your lover with another, or the suffering through the death of a kindred soul. Had Zevyr a body and emotions once more, he would have wept for all eternity.
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:16:56 GMT
`````Soon after, however, a trilling, angelic melody echoed deep from within the well of blackness, and Zevyr forgot all about the creature that was the cause of his death. In fact, all that filled his mind -- the irony that he no longer had a physical mind never hit him -- was the siren's song, lulling him to his true death. Zevyr vaguely remembered something that should frighten him, some other part of him that screamed at him not to proceed, but he pushed it aside and moved toward the vortex... `````Toward his oblivion and salvation...
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`````Zevry Darim awoke to the blinding agony of sunrise, the gold-amber light bathing his cadaverous form and warming his chill bones. He put a hand up to shade his eyes and looked about the shallow hole that served as his "bed." Lying next to him was a body so torn apart it could not be identified as being male or female. Only the elongated canine teeth protruding from its horror-frozen maw and blood-red eyes that tracked his every move gave any indication as to its kin... `````A vampire. `````Zevyr rolled over onto the corpse -- how else could he address a living maggot feast? -- and looked full into its eyes. He flicked the stake that punctured its heart and grinned darkly as it flinched. Zevyr glanced up to see the sunlight creeping down the side of the hole, then beyond to make sure the sunlight filled the glade. With everything ready, he addressed the vampire beneath him. `````"Good morning, Balzemier," he beamed maniacally, his voice filled with a deep, Western accent. "How does it feel, hmm? The last of your great House, not to mention your Clan, and here you are lying in a hole with a stake through your chest. Did you really think that you could escape me after all this time? Once we set out to put one of you down, we don't stop until you've paid Her price." `````Zevyr looked up to the encroaching sunlight again, then back down to the vampire. `````"Well, Balzey, old boy, I'd simply love to stay for the barbey, but i simply must dash." `````He reached into the chest pocket of his black vest and drew out a thick strand of twine. After tying it quickly around the stake and saluting the vampire, Zevyr climbed out of the hole, still gripping one end of the twine. `````Smelling the smoke of the now-burning Balzemier, Zevyr turned and yanked on the twine, dislodging the stake. `````"So I can hear you scream," Zevyr muttered evilly to himself as he stuffed the stake and twine into the deep pocket of his flowing black duster. `````And scream Balzemier did; a horrible, echoing wail that filled the glade and sent every bird in the area into the air from sheer panic. Zevyr never stopped or looked back, even when the vampire's screams ceased.
`````High up over the grim scene, a single raven sat unphased on a thick tree limb. After a moment, it let out a single, mournful caw before taking flight and following Zevyr down the forest path.
`````Zevyr wasted no time on ceremony or ritual, letting his body discoporeate into etherial energy and moving into the Twilight Realm, a place between the mortal plane and Til'Igris, the dark creation of the Keeper. Few native-born Til'Igrans knew of the Twilight Realm, and fewer still had knowledge of the mortal planes. No Til'Igran was allowed, by punishment of exile, to traverse the Twilight Realms and enter any mortal plane without express permission from a Clan Prince or the Keeper Himself. `````Zevyr often enjoyed his venture through the Twilight Realms, as he could gain glimpses of the past, present and future events within the Pattern. While Til'Igris, the World of Dreams, was set in the Wheel of Fate, the mortal realms were constantly being woven, destroyed, and rewoven; so much so that anyone crossing over might end up in a different possibility each trip unless his or her Will remained firm. Thus, only those with great amounts of Will could go from one state of being to the next. That fact alone discouraged Travel by not Til'Igrans. If one became lost in the Pattern, ones etherial self -- the Til'Igran self -- would fade into nothingness, leaving one stranded in a "possibility" that may not be there the next moment. `````Zevyr's passage was granted by the Malaph Clan Prince, Lord Darimir, not by the Keeper. The Keeper, and omnicient and omnipotent being whom created Til'Igris, never gave audience to anyone but the House of Telri, the highest House in the Realm. House Oridai, consisting of those Til'Igrans who silently opposed the Keeper's rule, sat at a steady third under the House of Indar. Zevyr had decided long ago to leave the politics to the Elders and Princes. He had his own task to attend to -- the extermination of the House of the Blood. `````The House of the Blood, originally called the House of Vanador, was founded by a group of exiled Malaphim who could not overcome thier hunger for blood. Over centuries if their existance among the Til'Igran Houses, they began to evolve into deadly beings who needed to ingest blood to survive! They began to prey on their Til'Igran brothers until the Malaphim banded together and thrust the Vanador Clans into the darkest catacombs beneath the Citadel of Dreams, where they were bound by the Malaphim Prince's magic.
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:17:29 GMT
`````Within those catacombs, Blood priests practiced day and night, hoping to glean the abilities needed to free themselves. As thier hunger for knowledge grew, so did their need for blood, and with no other Houses from which to feed, they soon turned on one another. The mighty devoured the weak, and the clever consumed the unskilled until only thee Clans remained; the Balzemites, the Czenimi, and the Kenziral. With each Clan having no clear advantage over the other, the three Clan Princes came together and formed the Pact, whose terms are only known to the Blood Clans. Soon after that, the barrier sealing the Clans was shattered, and the Blood Clans fled the Citadel, and ultimately Til'Igris. `````Zevyr blinked, pushing his brother-Clan's dark history from his mind ashe approached the Citadel Gate. A great stone obilisk shrugged its way out on the sand dune that covered the vast majority of the Twilight Realms. He had originally feared the journey across its every-changing wasteland, but when Zevyr learned that time and distance were merely an illusion, Travel became a reflex for him. The only thing about the Citadel Gate that bothered him was Aranthil, its demonic guardian. There were only two ways past Aranthil; one was with a personal order from a Clan Prince and the other was in small pieces. `````Aranthil was perched on the wrought-iron gate that barred Zevyr's way into Til'Igris, his sail-like wings draped about his dark form and his thick tail hanging limply. As Zevyr alighted on a stone path that rose out of the sand dune to meet him, the Citadel Guardian peeked out from between its wings, a great yellow orb that bored into Zevyr's very being. A deep rumble came from within the darkness beyond the wings Aranthil's tail lashing from side to side. Zevyr tensed, hoping that he could remember all of the commands he had been taught. `````~I AM THE GUARDIAN OF THE CITADEL OF DREAMS,~ Aranthil's telepathic voice boomed within Zevyr's mind. ~WHO ARE YOU THAT SEEKS PASSAGE?~ `````"Be still, O Guardian. I am Zevyr'aluti'ba'darim, and I seek passage unto the Citadel of Dreams," Zevyr intoned formally, using his full Til'Igran name. `````~DO YOU HAVE THE KEY?~ `````"Nay, Guardian. You have the key, and will evermore." `````~DO YOU KNOW THE WAY?~ `````"Nay, Guardian. I am guided by the light of my Master, Lord Darimir." `````~THEN SHOW ME YOUR PROOF!~ `````Zevyr reached into his pocket and drew out a talisman bearing the symbols of the House of Oridai, the Malaphim glyph, and Darimir's personal sigil. It was said that the talismans were sealed with a Prince's magic so that Aranthil could be sure of its authenticity. Forging a fake talisman, or even possessing one was punishable by imprisonment bewteen the Citadel Gates. If one was not in possession of and authentic talisman, or if one did not know the magical process to protect themselves when Aranthil made his rounds... `````The Citadel Guardian gazed at the talisman for several moments before the yellow orb winked out and the great tail came to a rest. Silently, a slab slid into the earth, revealing a dimly lit passageway where several voices echoed from further down. Zevyr passed underneath Aranthil and slipped into the corridor, holding the talisman aloft as he had been instructed. No sooner had Zevyr crossed the theshold than the stone slab slammed shut behind him with a bone-chilling thud. Faster than he could blink, the talisman burst into a ghostly-white flame that chilled his plam rather than burning it. The light then played off of the polished stones of the corridor, giving the illusion of long-forgotten shades lurking just beneath the surface like sharks before a kill. `````Zevyr had traversed these corridors several times and knew that these spectres were very real; foes of the Keeper that fought against Him and lost. Any fledgling Til'Igran that sought patronage of the House of Oridai was taken through this hall to give them over three thousand reasons to wait until the time was right before spilling the Keeper's blood. Many joined the House of Oridai for no other purpose than to be on the front lines, and the Elders spent many hours disciplining the ideas of glory and honor out of them. Zevyr had been an apt enough pupil, but many of his peers came away from the "training" with not a few more scars than he after trying to show the Elders "exactly what they were capable of," and more often not with just words.
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:18:01 GMT
`````As if on cue, the spectres launched themselves at Zevyr, slashing at his clothes and rending great gashes in the cloth, all the while wailing at him to join them. He payed them and their attacks no heed, striding forward confidently. Like distance and time in the Twilight Realms, appearance was merely an illusion, sustained by Will, so Zevyr waded through the torrent of destitute souls. After a while, Zevyr let the image of his mortal clothes fade in his mind and he began to glow. The tatters of his duster fell away to reveal a high-collared, dark green cloak decorated with superbly-embroidered Malaphim glyph. His vest closed together, contorted and became a heavy tunic, Zevyr's personal sigil under Darimir's situated neatly just below his collar. Finally, his trusty fali'sara, a sword especially designed for a House's din'shalar -- the "death bringer" as he was known among the Malaphim -- formed from his back. Zevyr shrugged his cloak into a more comfortable position on his shoulders and drew the cowl over his head as he neared the end of the corridor. As he closed the last few feet, another slab slid away and a multitude of lights flooded the corridor and a sad kind of relief washed over him as he stepped into his home. `````The Citadel of Dreams and Til'Igris
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Thus ends the first prologue of "The Final Gate." I am more than open to questions, comments, etc. I know there are plenty of unsolved things, but I will try and clear them up as the story moves on. Feel free to share this with anyone you know and trust. Prologue Two is still being ironed out, but is still in the works. Have no fear, it will be done within a week or so, and will be sent out after I type it out (when I find the time...).
Now, I know all of you vampire-lovers are saying, "What a damned bastard!" To that I say, "SO" Remember that this is Zevyr's profession and also he comes form a completely different world and frame of mind. He may eventually change, so never fear. Do you really think that I would use one main character to gack another?! Please, that is soooo not me.
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:19:00 GMT
((comp dated 7-30-2003))
To those whom have sent in thier permission to use their characters, here is the first installment of the story that I am working on based on characters from on-line sources; those people who have touched my life for better or for worse. A while back, I sat down with a few friends and tossed ideas for a role-playing system about with them. We constructed a vast world, in which this story is based. Although not all of it will be revealed within these pages, I hope to share a little of my mind and talent with some of my friends.
To those whom have yet to send in their response concerning this, read this and decide if I would represent your characters with the flare and awe that you have. I would like to note, however, that sometime in the future, I hope to be able to publish this story, as well as the RPG it was based on, and I trust that anything contained herein will not be used without my permission. Trust begets trust, and you have all earned mine... Please enjoy!
NOTE: Due to the lack of tab availability, I have had to think up something to indent so that the paragraphs won't blend together. If you see a `````, it indicates an indent. Sorry for the confusion. I know, it looks dumb, but :-p!
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The Final Gate
Prologue One-- "Zevyr"
`````Zevyr Darim tried vainly to claw his way out of sleep, but it dragged him back down easily...
`````He floated easily through the dark woodland of his homeland, running as silent as a wolf and not phased that the trees flew past his head at a blinding speed. It did however, shake his nerves a bit when he broke into a brightly lit glade and stared into the face of death.
`````The flurry of ebon wings announced the arrival of Zevyr's other half...
`````It had no name -- at least, none that Zevyr could think of -- but it stared at him with feral, serpentine eyes and it loomed over something human. Its mouth dropped open to reveal two rows of razor-sharp fangs and it hissed in an almost inviting manor before leaping at him, claws extended, and a sinuous voice flowed into his mind. `````~She could not walk the Vale. Can you?~
`````Zevyr muttered and turned in his sleep, but Father Night would not let go of such a vivid vision constructed by his servants, Dream and Illusion...
`````He floated over his own body, admiring the creature's handiwork in a detatched and stoic manner. Its head was in his chest like a pig gone to slop, his intestines flung aside during its search for more inviting organs. After -- what Zevyr assumed -- several hours, it looked up at him and uttered, "Why do you still linger here? Does Oblivion deny you Her sweet song? Or do you hear it and simply wish to remain?" `````The voice came not from the creature's mouth, as he might have expected, but from a cool azure glow that Zevyr never noticed before. Then his gaze was drawn to his right, where a thin thread trailed from his body to a swirling vortex of infinite blackness; and not just any blackness, but a shade of nothing that exceeded human comprehension. In contrast to the vortex, the thread seemed blinding, and Zevyr could only think of one word: anguish. The kind of pain when finding your lover with another, or the suffering through the death of a kindred soul. Had Zevyr a body and emotions once more, he would have wept for all eternity. `````Soon after, however, a trilling, angelic melody echoed deep from within the well of blackness, and Zevyr forgot all about the creature that was the cause of his death. In fact, all that filled his mind -- the irony that he no longer had a physical mind never hit him -- was the siren's song, lulling him to his true death. Zevyr vaguely remembered something that should frighten him, some other part of him that screamed at him not to proceed, but he pushed it aside and moved toward the vortex... `````Toward his oblivion and salvation...
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`````Zevry Darim awoke to the blinding agony of sunrise, the gold-amber light bathing his cadaverous form and warming his chill bones. He put a hand up to shade his eyes and looked about the shallow hole that served as his "bed." Lying next to him was a body so torn apart it could not be identified as being male or female. Only the elongated canine teeth protruding from its horror-frozen maw and blood-red eyes that tracked his every move gave any indication as to its kin... `````A vampire. `````Zevyr rolled over onto the corpse -- how else could he address a living maggot feast? -- and looked full into its eyes. He flicked the stake that punctured its heart and grinned darkly as it flinched. Zevyr glanced up to see the sunlight creeping down the side of the hole, then beyond to make sure the sunlight filled the glade. With everything ready, he addressed the vampire beneath him. `````"Good morning, Balzemier," he beamed maniacally, his voice filled with a deep, Western accent. "How does it feel, hmm? The last of your great House, not to mention your Clan, and here you are lying in a hole with a stake through your chest. Did you really think that you could escape me after all this time? Once we set out to put one of you down, we don't stop until you've paid Her price." `````Zevyr looked up to the encroaching sunlight again, then back down to the vampire. `````"Well, Balzey, old boy, I'd simply love to stay for the barbey, but i simply must dash." `````He reached into the chest pocket of his black vest and drew out a thick strand of twine. After tying it quickly around the stake and saluting the vampire, Zevyr climbed out of the hole, still gripping one end of the twine. `````Smelling the smoke of the now-burning Balzemier, Zevyr turned and yanked on the twine, dislodging the stake. `````"So I can hear you scream," Zevyr muttered evilly to himself as he stuffed the stake and twine into the deep pocket of his flowing black duster. `````And scream Balzemier did; a horrible, echoing wail that filled the glade and sent every bird in the area into the air from sheer panic. Zevyr never stopped or looked back, even when the vampire's screams ceased.
`````High up over the grim scene, a single raven sat unphased on a thick tree limb. After a moment, it let out a single, mournful caw before taking flight and following Zevyr down the forest path.
`````Zevyr wasted no time on ceremony or ritual, letting his body discoporeate into etherial energy and moving into the Twilight Realm, a place between the mortal plane and Til'Igris, the dark creation of the Keeper. Few native-born Til'Igrans knew of the Twilight Realm, and fewer still had knowledge of the mortal planes. No Til'Igran was allowed, by punishment of exile, to traverse the Twilight Realms and enter any mortal plane without express permission from a Clan Prince or the Keeper Himself. `````Zevyr often enjoyed his venture through the Twilight Realms, as he could gain glimpses of the past, present and future events within the Pattern. While Til'Igris, the World of Dreams, was set in the Wheel of Fate, the mortal realms were constantly being woven, destroyed, and rewoven; so much so that anyone crossing over might end up in a different possibility each trip unless his or her Will remained firm. Thus, only those with great amounts of Will could go from one state of being to the next. That fact alone discouraged Travel by not Til'Igrans. If one became lost in the Pattern, ones etherial self -- the Til'Igran self -- would fade into nothingness, leaving one stranded in a "possibility" that may not be there the next moment.
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:19:32 GMT
`````Zevyr's passage was granted by the Malaph Clan Prince, Lord Darimir, not by the Keeper. The Keeper, and omnicient and omnipotent being whom created Til'Igris, never gave audience to anyone but the House of Telri, the highest House in the Realm. House Oridai, consisting of those Til'Igrans who silently opposed the Keeper's rule, sat at a steady third under the House of Indar. Zevyr had decided long ago to leave the politics to the Elders and Princes. He had his own task to attend to -- the extermination of the House of the Blood. `````The House of the Blood, originally called the House of Vanador, was founded by a group of exiled Malaphim who could not overcome thier hunger for blood. Over centuries if their existance among the Til'Igran Houses, they began to evolve into deadly beings who needed to ingest blood to survive! They began to prey on their Til'Igran brothers until the Malaphim banded together and thrust the Vanador Clans into the darkest catacombs beneath the Citadel of Dreams, where they were bound by the Malaphim Prince's magic. `````Within those catacombs, Blood priests practiced day and night, hoping to glean the abilities needed to free themselves. As thier hunger for knowledge grew, so did their need for blood, and with no other Houses from which to feed, they soon turned on one another. The mighty devoured the weak, and the clever consumed the unskilled until only thee Clans remained; the Balzemites, the Czenimi, and the Kenziral. With each Clan having no clear advantage over the other, the three Clan Princes came together and formed the Pact, whose terms are only known to the Blood Clans. Soon after that, the barrier sealing the Clans was shattered, and the Blood Clans fled the Citadel, and ultimately Til'Igris. `````Zevyr blinked, pushing his brother-Clan's dark history from his mind ashe approached the Citadel Gate. A great stone obilisk shrugged its way out on the sand dune that covered the vast majority of the Twilight Realms. He had originally feared the journey across its every-changing wasteland, but when Zevyr learned that time and distance were merely an illusion, Travel became a reflex for him. The only thing about the Citadel Gate that bothered him was Aranthil, its demonic guardian. There were only two ways past Aranthil; one was with a personal order from a Clan Prince and the other was in small pieces. `````Aranthil was perched on the wrought-iron gate that barred Zevyr's way into Til'Igris, his sail-like wings draped about his dark form and his thick tail hanging limply. As Zevyr alighted on a stone path that rose out of the sand dune to meet him, the Citadel Guardian peeked out from between its wings, a great yellow orb that bored into Zevyr's very being. A deep rumble came from within the darkness beyond the wings Aranthil's tail lashing from side to side. Zevyr tensed, hoping that he could remember all of the commands he had been taught. `````~I AM THE GUARDIAN OF THE CITADEL OF DREAMS,~ Aranthil's telepathic voice boomed within Zevyr's mind. ~WHO ARE YOU THAT SEEKS PASSAGE?~ `````"Be still, O Guardian. I am Zevyr'aluti'ba'darim, and I seek passage unto the Citadel of Dreams," Zevyr intoned formally, using his full Til'Igran name. `````~DO YOU HAVE THE KEY?~ `````"Nay, Guardian. You have the key, and will evermore." `````~DO YOU KNOW THE WAY?~ `````"Nay, Guardian. I am guided by the light of my Master, Lord Darimir." `````~THEN SHOW ME YOUR PROOF!~ `````Zevyr reached into his pocket and drew out a talisman bearing the symbols of the House of Oridai, the Malaphim glyph, and Darimir's personal sigil. It was said that the talismans were sealed with a Prince's magic so that Aranthil could be sure of its authenticity. Forging a fake talisman, or even possessing one was punishable by imprisonment bewteen the Citadel Gates. If one was not in possession of and authentic talisman, or if one did not know the magical process to protect themselves when Aranthil made his rounds... `````The Citadel Guardian gazed at the talisman for several moments before the yellow orb winked out and the great tail came to a rest. Silently, a slab slid into the earth, revealing a dimly lit passageway where several voices echoed from further down. Zevyr passed underneath Aranthil and slipped into the corridor, holding the talisman aloft as he had been instructed. No sooner had Zevyr crossed the theshold than the stone slab slammed shut behind him with a bone-chilling thud. Faster than he could blink, the talisman burst into a ghostly-white flame that chilled his plam rather than burning it. The light then played off of the polished stones of the corridor, giving the illusion of long-forgotten shades lurking just beneath the surface like sharks before a kill. `````Zevyr had traversed these corridors several times and knew that these spectres were very real; foes of the Keeper that fought against Him and lost. Any fledgling Til'Igran that sought patronage of the House of Oridai was taken through this hall to give them over three thousand reasons to wait until the time was right before spilling the Keeper's blood. Many joined the House of Oridai for no other purpose than to be on the front lines, and the Elders spent many hours disciplining the ideas of glory and honor out of them. Zevyr had been an apt enough pupil, but many of his peers came away from the "training" with not a few more scars than he after trying to show the Elders "exactly what they were capable of," and more often not with just words. `````As if on cue, the spectres launched themselves at Zevyr, slashing at his clothes and rending great gashes in the cloth, all the while wailing at him to join them. He payed them and their attacks no heed, striding forward confidently. Like distance and time in the Twilight Realms, appearance was merely an illusion, sustained by Will, so Zevyr waded through the torrent of destitute souls. After a while, Zevyr let the image of his mortal clothes fade in his mind and he began to glow. The tatters of his duster fell away to reveal a high-collared, dark green cloak decorated with superbly-embroidered Malaphim glyph. His vest closed together, contorted and became a heavy tunic, Zevyr's personal sigil under Darimir's situated neatly just below his collar. Finally, his trusty fali'sara, a sword especially designed for a House's din'shalar -- the "death bringer" as he was known among the Malaphim -- formed from his back. Zevyr shrugged his cloak into a more comfortable position on his shoulders and drew the cowl over his head as he neared the end of the corridor. As he closed the last few feet, another slab slid away and a multitude of lights flooded the corridor and a sad kind of relief washed over him as he stepped into his home. `````The Citadel of Dreams and Til'Igris
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Thus ends the first prologue of "The Final Gate." I am more than open to questions, comments, etc. I know there are plenty of unsolved things, but I will try and clear them up as the story moves on. Feel free to share this with anyone you know and trust. Prologue Two is still being ironed out, but is still in the works. Have no fear, it will be done within a week or so, and will be sent out after I type it out (when I find the time...).
Now, I know all of you vampire-lovers are saying, "What a damned bastard!" To that I say, "SO" Remember that this is Zevyr's profession and also he comes form a completely different world and frame of mind. He may eventually change, so never fear. Do you really think that I would use one main character to gack another?! Please, that is soooo not me.
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:20:12 GMT
FINAL GATE <PROLOGUE II> by Chris Masterson...........Ja'Shin R'hjod To all my friends, Sorry this one took so long, guys, but I had to calm down for a bit after a tradgety. This is actually my second time typing it. The first time, I was three paragraphs -- THREE FRIGGIN' PARAGRAPHS -- away from finishing the second part to the story when I got up to stretch my legs. Some young little punk zipped into my seat, thinking that I was done with my 'puter and minimized my window so that he could chat with his girlfriend! When I got my seat back, I restored the window to its full size to see a blank message screen! Argh, I was sooo pissed! Anywho, let's get to the nitty-gritty. Feedback is appreciated, and so are any other messages you feel the need to send. So, without further ado, I give you the second installment of "The Final Gate". Enjoy! NOTE: Indents are represented by "`````". Sorry! :-` ------------------------------------------------------- The Final Gate Prologue Two, "Darkened Path, Reborn Rage" `````Jandar Darkheart stood tall on a high mountain bluff overlooking an unnamed seacoast during the steel-grey of predawn, the wind buffeting his face and tossing his hair about. Behind him sat Ja'Shin R'Hjod, Jandar's brother-in-arms and, quite possibly, his truest friend. Ja'Shin's eyes were closed in deep concentration, and his hands were clasped tightly in his lap, but a calm smile decorated his face. Jandar smirked darkly for a moment, then turned to the creeping light of morning. The two of them had always ventured out to this bluff whenever they could, a reminder that... `````Jandar's though was shattered when a deep red ball of light crested the rise, and Jandar's arms flew up in a vain effort to shield himself from the glow. Then he remembered that this was all an elaborate illusion sustained by Ja'Shin, and slowly slowly faced the "sun" with growing confidence. `````"Realistic, eh," Ja'Shin asked happily, shifting slightly in his seat, and Jandar could only nod. `````What Jandar was seeing was a recreation of the sunrise Ja'Shin had seen several hours before their appointed meeting. Being a vampire himself -- unwillingly, yes, but a fact he had to live with -- Jandar was unable to see the beauty contained within the daylight hours and relied on Ja'Shin to be his eyes. Ja'Shin used the opportunity to practice his magical lessons -- "show off" was a better phrase -- and remind Ja'Shin of his humanity, so that each gained something from the experience. Jandar also saw it as a test of willpower. The first few times, Jandar has run screaming and sometimes attacked Ja'Shin until his friend was able to subdue him. Jandar and Ja'Shin were equal in fighting abilities as long as both kept their heads, and there was no clear victor between a frenzying vampire and a startled Divarian. There were a few times that each had been seriously hurt during the early sessions. `````But with Ja'Shin's aid, Jandar had overcome the beast within, and incidents like that were few and far between. Jandar watched the "sunrise" until the illusionary golden disk was well above the horizon before turning to the other and sighing. `````"All right, Jas," he growled, trying to appear angry, "enough! I've got better things to do than watch you play." Ja'Shin opened his eyes and the illusion faded. The sun became the moon and day was consumed by night. `````"Especially today," Ja'Shin asked, the smile on his face only growing. `````Jandar nodded. "Yes. Especially today." `````This night held special meaning for Jandar, since it was this same night many years ago when Jandar's wife, Elizabeth, had mysteriously disappered. Jandar never spoke much of her, but when he did, Ja'Shin saw in his friend's face the faint hope that she would return. Ja'Shin had been away during those years when they were together, but thankfully had returned after her disappearance when Jandar was suicidal. Ja'Shin had a few physical -- and not so few mental -- scars from Jandar trying to hurt him enough so that Ja'Shin would leave him alone. Ja'Shin's resolve, devotion and talent had been one of the cornerstones of Jandar's recovery. `````Jandar and Ja'Shin walked in respectful silence along the coastline, up a woodland path, and ultimately to an abandoned cottage. Ja'Shin stopped several paces from the doorway, leaving his companion alone and devoted himself to keeping his friend protected during these proceedings. Jandar continued on, ducking under the decaying entryway and moving into, what used to be, the bedroom. Taking a blood-red rose from his cloak, he knelt, and placed it on the floor. Then he bowed his head and fell silent. After several moments, Jandar stood and walked out, nodding to Ja'Shin `````After the cottage was out of sight and Jandar's mood lifted, Ja'Shin looked at his companion and broke the silence. `````"So," he said tentatively, "how did it all happen? You two meeting, I mean. I never heard the whole story." `````"Not much to tell." Jandar's eyes grew distant as he recalled those now-painful memories. "You know how it goes, boy meets girl-" `````They had met in a tavern, of all places. He was looking for vampires to slay and she was a young woman in search of adventure. Jandar had word that one of the local lords was preying on villagers, especially women, and Elizabeth had been summoned by a lord to appear at his court. Jandar, never one to miss an opportunity, offered to be her bodyguard on the long, dark roads ahead. She accepted and their fates were sealed. `````"-boy falls in love with girl-" `````Unfortunately, Jandar never found hard evidence against the lord to pin him as a vampire, so he remained in town, accompanying Elizabeth every time she was summoned to appear before him. They grew close and, as it tends to, love began to blossom. `````"-boy marries girl-" `````After two years of observation, Jandar had found the hard evidence he needed, but he put the elimination of the vampire lord aside for making marriage plans. Finally, on a beautiful autumn day, they were joined. `````"-boy gets called away-" `````Their honeymoon was cut short when Jandar received word that a large vampire group was slowly moving westward. Jandar left immediately and vowed to return soon. `````"-boy returns to his beloved-" `````Jandar return to their cottage several months later to his wife, and after many hours of recounting events, they retired for the evening. `````"-boy and girl are happy-" `````She attacked him in the middle of the night, clawing at him with savage fury, her eyes more feral than loving. Jandar fought back, but Elizabeth had changed. She lifted him off of the ground as if he were a rag doll and cast him against the wall. With inhuman speed she was on him again, pinning him against the wall by his shoulders. She bared long fangs and snarled before darting for his neck. `````"-girl disappears in the night." `````Jandar fought on two fronts, one for consciousness and the other with himself. Should he slay the vampire, his enemy, and his wife, his love? His vision became blurred and his movements sluggish, the first sign of vampirism. Should he allow her to live and hope they can love in unlife? His mouth became dry and he felt unusually thirsty, the second sign. Jandar summoned up all of his strength and launched his attack, grabbing a stake from his belt, hanging nearby, and ramming it home into her heart. She convulsed once before exploding into a plume of dust. `````Jandar had saved his own life at the cost of another's, or so he thought. `````Ja'Shin saw the tension etched into Jandar's face and decided to let the issue drop. Having lost his love and his home in the Frontier War, Ja'Shin knew what Jandar was going through. Since the fall of the Hunter's Conclave, the Divarian was never his old self, and subject to bouts of severe depression. Whenever Ja'Shin and Jandar were together, they seemed to feel off of each other's pain, and somehow grew stronger. This happened only after a long bout of insults and bickering, and even a good melee. Neither injured the other past bruises and scratched due to the fact that both combatants were seasoned fighters and knew how to pull blows. However, since Ja'Shin was the only one armed and armored at the moment, any fighting that happened this day would be purely hand-to-hand. Ja'Shin couldn't help but snicker; it seemed as if their entire relationship was based on arguing and fighting. `````"What's so funny, Jas," Jandar muttered, elbowing his friend in the ribs. `````"Us." Ja'Shin noticed the smirk on Jandar's face and prepared himself for anything. "Look at us, Jan. Two old fools kicking around life like we own it. I feel downright useless nowadays with all of the young blood bouncing around, and you are useless; all dark and brooding about everything." `````"You're coming up on, what, you six thousandth birthday within the next few weeks?" `````"Bite me," Ja'Shin grinned. "I'm only five hundred." `````"Now that you mention it," Jandar said brightly, fangs elongating, "I am a bit hungry."
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:21:52 GMT
`````Ja'Shin chuckled wryly and offered an arm. Jandar smacked it away quickly. Divarians had a natural defense against vampires; being magically-infused creatures, Divarian blood took to vampires like a dose of charcoal ingested by a human. Jandar's reaction to Ja'Shin's blood when they had first met had been mild, causing Jandar to retch for only an hour. The Divarian never quite understood how he was able to walk amongst the vampire population unmolested, but he always assumed that word got around. `````A deep-toned bell sang out thirteen times off to the south, and the two friends passed a confused look between them. `````"What was that," Ja'Shin growled. `````"The Bell of Vitae," Jandar replied glumly. "A signal to our kindred that a great danger is about the land. I need to go." `````"Right behind you." Ja'Shin was already glowing a sullen amber, a sign that he was about to use his magic. `````"No mortals, Jas." `````"Like hell I'm going to sit this one out! I got loyalties to uphold, ya know." Ja'Shin blurred into the form of a large white wolf and cast a daring look at Jandar before the golden aura faded. `````"No means no, Jas. True, the Bell calls for a truce among factions, but that does not mean that mortals are included. You may get hurt if you attend." `````"So? If they ask about me, say that I'm your snack for the proceedings." Jandar could only gag as he turned his path southward. `````The two arrived at the Temple of Midnight shortly after the Bell of Vitae chimed again. Ja'Shin and Jandar fell into the slow-moving train of bodies that wound down the north face of a mountain pass and ultimately into a long, snaking tunnel. As each vampire crossed the threshold of the tunnel, black tendrils of shadow encased each one in order to maintain anonymity. Within the Temple, all were equals and the veil of darkness denied any heated conversations from being taken outside to the physical level. Ja'Shin used his magic to draw the shadows about himself, as the form of a wolf made his muscles cramp up, and joined the mass flowing into the audience hall. `````The Temple of Midnight itself was a bowl of black marble into which tier upon tier had been carved At the base of the bowl, each Prince -- or Princess, as some Clans had -- sat on a small throne bearing the symbol of their faction on its back. In the center of the thrones was a high dais where the Speaker stood, a dark figure dressed in flowing, blood-red robes. As with tradition, the Speaker wore a white mask; its only distinguishing marks were the gaping, snake-like mouth with elongated fangs, and the inverted crimson triangles beneath each eyehole. As everyone was seated, the Speaker rapped a gnarled oak staff on the ground sharply, calling the group to order. `````"For centuries," the Speaker intoned, "we vampires have been secreting ourselves amongst the mortals, trying to maintain and empire forged many years before us. The goal of that empire has been nothing less than the total dominion over the mortals. For centuries, we vampires have played a game of chess; moving pawns forward and securing power in an attempt to reach that goal, and for centuries, we have failed. `````"This has been caused due to a growing amount of discord within the Clans. Some of our kind have been working alongside our prey, and there are those of us who actively seek out and destroy our brethren for revenge." A low rumble reverberated throughout the chamber as many vampires growled at that fact. `````"I feel your anger, my brothers and sisters, but I bear even graver news: a vampire hunter is slowly destroying us Clan by Clan." `````"Surely you can't be saying that a mere mortal is giving our kind enough trouble to require us here," one form called down. `````"Out of order," the Speaker mused, "but no less a valid question. True, were it a mortal, the Bell of Vitae would not have been sounded, but we are not dealing with a mortal. The floor will now recognize Lord Balzemier, one of the only ones of us to survive the Hunter's attacks. Lord Bazemier to the dais, please." `````A subtle murmur flowed through the Temple as a charred and mishappen form clad in a well-tailored suit mounted the dais. Prince Balzemier had been considered by many to have been a handsome, if not dashing, figure, but the creature that now stood next to the Speaker could only be called hideous at best. Balzemier stood hunched over slightly, his flesh crawling visibly as it worked to heal itself at an excellerated rate. His taloned hands hung weakly at his side, the nails long and twisted. Balzemier's face was frozen in a scowl of concentration, and as he spoke, his voice shifted between strained and tortured. `````"Fellow vampires," he began, scanning the room with his shrewd eyes, "indeed the thing that did this to me was no mere mortal. My attacker was a creature from beyond the Realm; a demonic killer that has no equal on this plane. Indeed, only through my luck and cunning was I able to survive." `````"Whatever," someone yelled. "You probably were scared by a rabbit and stumbled into the sun. You're only calling this meeting to save your reputation and pride."
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`````"Perhaps," Balzemier admitted, stretching his hand toward the speaker. The unfortunate individual rose several feet from the ground, clutching his chest and writhing in pain. After a moment of high-pitched screaming, the floating vampire exploded in a shower of blood that flowed down into Balzemier's mouth. The body hit the floor with a final-sounding thump. "But then again, you will never know now, will you?" `````"Now," Balzemier said brightly, his body suddenly healthy again, "I trust that there will be no further interruptions? Good! Let's move on, shall we?" `````Balzemier paced about the dais for a moment. `````"This creature parades about this Realm as a human under the name of Zevyr Darim, and I assure you that he is no pushover. However, he hails from a shadowed reality that was beyond our reach until a few days ago. One of our number uncovered an artifact that would allow one of our kind to traverse the barrier between this reality and the next. Through our efforts, we have been able to duplicate the artifact. We intend to send three volunteers across the barrier to locate Zevyr and destroy him. I have been notified by Princess Alyianna of the Shadow family that Tiara Darkstone has already volunteered. I need two more brave...shall we say...souls to aid me." `````Ja'Shin nudged Jandar, and Jandar's hand shot up reluctantly. Balzemier nodded and called out for another. `````"Why me," Jandar muttered, glaring at Ja'Shin. `````"Simple, bro," Ja'Shin grinned. "Tia's my friend, but I can't go to help, as I'm no blood-sucker. That leaves you, ya lucky bum!" `````"You owe me big for this one, pleb!" `````"Deal. 'Sides, you're already picked, bud. Too bad I'm not a vampire, eh, Jan?" `````"I can fix that," Jandar growled darkly. `````"Drink?" Ja'Shin proffered his wrist yet again, but it was slapped away. `````"Shut up and go 'way!" `````"Anyway, something about his story doesn't ring true." `````"Oh?" Jandar turned his glare back to the other. `````"Just a hunch." Ja'Shin replied. `````"Next time you have a hunch, let me know so that I have ample time to beat you!" `````Ja'Shin chuckled and escorted Jandar down to the dais where Tiara and the other volunteer were waiting. `````Jandar and his companions mounted the dais, coming upon -- what Ja'Shin had aptly named -- "the Darkling family." Tiara Darkstone, a raven-haired woman of lithe, supple grace from beyond the Northern Reaches stood next to Ri'Ind Ti'Shan, her long-time lover and ex-Master of the Hunter's Conclave. As usual, she wore a loose-fitting, light brown bodice with a daring neckline and a snug pair of breeches of similar hue. About her waist sat a thick leather belt from which hung two strangely-curved daggers only slightly shorter than her forearms, like canine teeth of some fierce predator. A pair of smaller throwing daggers sat at the tops of her boots, ready to be used, and she absently maneuvered an ornate knife from finger to finger. Ri'Ind, swathed all in black seemed to watch everything at once and appeared to be Tiara's shadow given form. `````Beyond those two, Timber Darksbane conversed quietly with her husband, Dinin. Timber's warm smile was mirrored on her lover's face as they talked, if only more dark and sinister. Her deep red hair almost matched the color of Dinin's cloak, which was the hue of dried blood, and cascaded neatly down her back like a ruby waterfall. She was clad in a neat blue dress, which reflected off of her emerald eyes as would a sea at twilight. Like Tiara, she was armed with an ornate dagger that hung neatly at her side. As Jandar and his counterpart stepped into the ring of light, Dinin politely broke away from his chat and approached Ja'Shin. `````Darkheart, Darkstone, and Darksbane; a diverse group bearing a common root in name. With all assembled, the refreshed and restored Balzemier stepped from the shadows, flanked by the Speaker and another man who muttered to himself, nodding every now and then. The volunteers and their companions formed a semicircle in front of Balzemier as the Prince began to speak. His words were calm and his tone low, but an aire of command was nestled within. `````"Thank you all for accepting this dangerous, yet necessary task of eliminating this threat to our kind. Successful or not, your bravery will be remembered throughout history. `````"Now, to put aside the pleasantries, I have brought with me my brother," Balzemier motioned to the other man, who was still muttering, "Kenzir, to be your guide to and from the nether realm from which Zevyr hails. He can give you valuable information about customs, organizations, and the basic 'do's' and 'don'ts'" `````Balzemier hefted three talismans marked with alien glyphs and handed one to Jandar, Tiara and Timber. `````"These artifacts will endow you with the ability to traverse the barrier between our reality and his. However, once you pass through the Gate into the other reality, you must return to the same Gate in order to come up this reality again. Counter to that, you must only will yourself to cross from this reality to the other, regardless of location. We have yet to be able to explain it. `````"I have stated all that you need to know at this time. My Lord and Master has informed me of little more on this matter, so you are not the only ones in the dark, so to speak. Kenzir, you have your instructions. All of you are dismissed." `````Kenzir seemed to snap out of his trance and nodded to Balzemier. Without another word, Kenzir reached into the front of his black tunic and drew out a more battered version of the strange talisman -- most likely, Jandar thought, the original. Kenzir seemed to stretch out for a brief second before his form snapped together into a tight glowing line of hot crimson and dissolving. Concentrating on the talisman, Jandar felt a peculiar lurch before the world went black. `````When the last of the volunteers had vanished and their friends had left, Balzemier turned to the Speaker and grinned evilly. `````"So, Master Vanador," he crooned, "what do you think of it all?" `````"The hounds have been set loose. All that remains now is to see if they flush the prey or are taken by it. One way or another, my son, we shall have Zevyr'aluti'ba'darim, and three lives are a small trade." `````Balzemier nodded, a dark sneer climbing onto his face like a meniacle mask. "Well put, my master. Well put, indeed." ------------------------------------------------------- And thus ends another section to the vast tale that there is to tell. What further mysteries will be revealed next time? Alright, so I sound like a light-blasted soap opera with those lines, but oh well. Some have made the comment that this is very World of Darkness, and to that I only have this to say: it is my own creation, true as life and honest as rain. Since much of what goes on within the Tavern and other parts of the Realm are based on the WoD, I had to tread softly when writing this part of the story. The first prologue was mostly written from Zevyr's perspective, so the terminology was easy. Not so with this section. "Kindred" and other such references are nowadays associated with White Wolf that any other time you use it, someone always has to yell "plagiarist!" Comments and questions (even a suggestion or two) is always appreciated, and those who do not understand certain parts of the story, or would like to learn more need only say so. I see feedback as a way to refine my "art" and make it more enveloping. Also, I'd like to apologise if I did not represent your character correctly, did not dress him/her as you had, or armed them differently than you intended. One thing I did not regret changing is the typical Goth "black hair, pale-skined, wan-looking" vampire archtype. Too many of those out there have those traits and its uninvenive. For some it fits, others it doesn't. I have depicted the features of the characters as I have imagined them. If there are those that want to refresh my memory as to what the character is armed with or looks like, be my guest. To those who already have, I remember well, but may keep what is written. Until next time, kiddies! Jas P.S.: Just for fun (if it worked) I have included the Malaphim glyph that I whipped up for the RPG. If anyone would like to join up with me and help me create this, they are more than welcome to do so. I desperately need people I can trust, and writing a whole world down -- to the tiniest detail -- is rough, and setting it in order is tougher. Ciao!
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:23:00 GMT
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Date: Wed, 22 Mar 2000 08:00:04 -0800 (PST) From: Hunter's Conclave <huntersconclave@yahoo.com> | Block address Subject: "The Final Gate," Prologue One To: Melissa Wilson <ms_trinket@yahoo.com> Add Addresses
Mel,
After our talk a few nights ago, I tried to send you the first prologue, but it wouldn't go through, so here I am, trying again. Below is the original document, so enjoy!
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To those whom have sent in their permission to use their characters, here is the first installment of the story that I am working on based on characters from on-line sources; those people who have touched my life for better or for worse. A while back, I sat down with a few friends and tossed ideas for a role-playing system about with them. We constructed a vast world, in which this story is based. Although not all of it will be revealed within these pages, I hope to share a little of my mind and talent with some of my friends.
To those whom have yet to send in their response concerning this, read this and decide if I would represent your characters with the flare and awe that you have. I would like to note, however, that sometime in the future, I hope to be able to publish this story, as well as the RPG it was based on, and I trust that anything contained herein will not be used without my permission. Trust begets trust, and you have all earned mine... Please enjoy!
NOTE: Due to the lack of tab availability, I have had to think up something to indent so that the paragraphs won't blend together. If you see a `````, it indicates an indent. Sorry for the confusion. I know, it looks dumb, but :-p!
Jas
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The Final Gate
Prologue One-- "Zevyr"
`````Zevyr Darim tried vainly to claw his way out of sleep, but it dragged him back down easily...
`````He floated easily through the dark woodland of his homeland, running as silent as a wolf and not phased that the trees flew past his head at a blinding speed. It did however, shake his nerves a bit when he broke into a brightly lit glade and stared into the face of death.
`````The flurry of ebon wings announced the arrival of Zevyr's other half...
`````It had no name -- at least, none that Zevyr could think of -- but it stared at him with feral, serpentine eyes and it loomed over something human. Its mouth dropped open to reveal two rows of razor-sharp fangs and it hissed in an almost inviting manor before leaping at him, claws extended, and a sinuous voice flowed into his mind. `````~She could not walk the Vale. Can you?~
`````Zevyr muttered and turned in his sleep, but Father Night would not let go of such a vivid vision constructed by his servants, Dream and Illusion...
`````He floated over his own body, admiring the creature's handiwork in a detached and stoic manner. Its head was in his chest like a pig gone to slop, his intestines flung aside during its search for more inviting organs. After -- what Zevyr assumed -- several hours, it looked up at him and uttered, "Why do you still linger here? Does Oblivion deny you Her sweet song? Or do you hear it and simply wish to remain?" `````The voice came not from the creature's mouth, as he might have expected, but from a cool azure glow that Zevyr never noticed before. Then his gaze was drawn to his right, where a thin thread trailed from his body to a swirling vortex of infinite blackness; and not just any blackness, but a shade of nothing that exceeded human comprehension. In contrast to the vortex, the thread seemed blinding, and Zevyr could only think of one word: anguish. The kind of pain when finding your lover with another, or the suffering through the death of a kindred soul. Had Zevyr a body and emotions once more, he would have wept for all eternity. `````Soon after, however, a trilling, angelic melody echoed deep from within the well of blackness, and Zevyr forgot all about the creature that was the cause of his death. In fact, all that filled his mind -- the irony that he no longer had a physical mind never hit him -- was the siren's song, lulling him to his true death. Zevyr vaguely remembered something that should frighten him, some other part of him that screamed at him not to proceed, but he pushed it aside and moved toward the vortex... `````Toward his oblivion and salvation...
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`````Zevyr Darim awoke to the blinding agony of sunrise, the gold-amber light bathing his cadaverous form and warming his chill bones. He put a hand up to shade his eyes and looked about the shallow hole that served as his "bed." Lying next to him was a body so torn apart it could not be identified as being male or female. Only the elongated canine teeth protruding from its horror-frozen maw and blood-red eyes that tracked his every move gave any indication as to its kin... `````A vampire. `````Zevyr rolled over onto the corpse -- how else could he address a living maggot feast? -- and looked full into its eyes. He flicked the stake that punctured its heart and grinned darkly as it flinched. Zevyr glanced up to see the sunlight creeping down the side of the hole, then beyond to make sure the sunlight filled the glade. With everything ready, he addressed the vampire beneath him. `````"Good morning, Balzemier," he beamed maniacally, his voice filled with a deep, Western accent. "How does it feel, hmm? The last of your great House, not to mention your Clan, and here you are lying in a hole with a stake through your chest. Did you really think that you could escape me after all this time? Once we set out to put one of you down, we don't stop until you've paid Her price." `````Zevyr looked up to the encroaching sunlight again, then back down to the vampire. `````"Well, Balzey, old boy, I'd simply love to stay for the barbey, but I simply must dash." `````He reached into the chest pocket of his black vest and drew out a thick strand of twine. After tying it quickly around the stake and saluting the vampire, Zevyr climbed out of the hole, still gripping one end of the twine. `````Smelling the smoke of the now-burning Balzemier, Zevyr turned and yanked on the twine, dislodging the stake. `````"So I can hear you scream," Zevyr muttered evilly to himself as he stuffed the stake and twine into the deep pocket of his flowing black duster. `````And scream Balzemier did; a horrible, echoing wail that filled the glade and sent every bird in the area into the air from sheer panic. Zevyr never stopped or looked back, even when the vampire's screams ceased.
`````High up over the grim scene, a single raven sat unphased on a thick tree limb. After a moment, it let out a single, mournful caw before taking flight and following Zevyr down the forest path.
`````Zevyr wasted no time on ceremony or ritual, letting his body discoporeate into ethereal energy and moving into the Twilight Realm, a place between the mortal plane and Til'Igris, the dark creation of the Keeper. Few native-born Til'Igrans knew of the Twilight Realm, and fewer still had knowledge of the mortal planes. No Til'Igran was allowed, by punishment of exile, to traverse the Twilight Realms and enter any mortal plane without express permission from a Clan Prince or the Keeper Himself. `````Zevyr often enjoyed his venture through the Twilight Realms, as he could gain glimpses of the past, present and future events within the Pattern. While Til'Igris, the World of Dreams, was set in the Wheel of Fate, the mortal realms were constantly being woven, destroyed, and rewoven; so much so that anyone crossing over might end up in a different possibility each trip unless his or her Will remained firm. Thus, only those with great amounts of Will could go from one state of being to the next. That fact alone discouraged Travel by not Til'Igrans. If one became lost in the Pattern, ones ethereal self – the Til'Igran self -- would fade into nothingness, leaving one stranded in a "possibility" that may not be there the next moment. `````Zevyr's passage was granted by the Malaph Clan Prince, Lord Darimir, not by the Keeper. The Keeper, and omniscient and omnipotent being who created Til'Igris, never gave audience to anyone but the House of Telri, the highest House in the Realm. House Oridai, consisting of those Til'Igrans who silently opposed the Keeper's rule, sat at a steady third under the House of Indar. Zevyr had decided long ago to leave the politics to the Elders and Princes. He had his own task to attend to -- the extermination of the House of the Blood. `````The House of the Blood, originally called the House of Vanador, was founded by a group of exiled Malaphim who could not overcome their hunger for blood. Over centuries if their existence among the Til'Igran Houses, they began to evolve into deadly beings who needed to ingest blood to survive! They began to prey on their Til'Igran brothers until the Malaphim banded together and thrust the Vanador Clans into the darkest catacombs beneath the Citadel of Dreams, where they were bound by the Malaphim Prince's magic. `````Within those catacombs, Blood priests practiced day and night, hoping to glean the abilities needed to free themselves. As their hunger for knowledge grew, so did their need for blood, and with no other Houses from which to feed, they soon turned on one another. The mighty devoured the weak, and the clever consumed the unskilled until only thee Clans remained; the Balzemites, the Czenimi, and the Kenziral. With each Clan having no clear advantage over the other, the three Clan Princes came together and formed the Pact, whose terms are only known to the Blood Clans. Soon after that, the barrier sealing the Clans was shattered, and the Blood Clans fled the Citadel, and ultimately Til'Igris.
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`````Zevyr blinked; pushing his brother-Clan's dark history from his mind as he approached the Citadel Gate. A great stone obelisk shrugged its way out on the sand dune that covered the vast majority of the Twilight Realms. He had originally feared the journey across its every-changing wasteland, but when Zevyr learned that time and distance were merely an illusion, Travel became a reflex for him. The only thing about the Citadel Gate that bothered him was Aranthil, its demonic guardian. There were only two ways past Aranthil; one was with a personal order from a Clan Prince and the other was in small pieces. `````Aranthil was perched on the wrought-iron gate that barred Zevyr's way into Til'Igris, his sail-like wings draped about his dark form and his thick tail hanging limply. As Zevyr alighted on a stone path that rose out of the sand dune to meet him, the Citadel Guardian peeked out from between its wings, a great yellow orb that bored into Zevyr's very being. A deep rumble came from within the darkness beyond the wings Aranthil's tail lashing from side to side. Zevyr tensed, hoping that he could remember all of the commands he had been taught. `````~I AM THE GUARDIAN OF THE CITADEL OF DREAMS,~ Aranthil's telepathic voice boomed within Zevyr's mind. ~WHO ARE YOU THAT SEEKS PASSAGE?~ `````"Be still, O Guardian. I am Zevyr'aluti'ba'darim, and I seek passage unto the Citadel of Dreams," Zevyr intoned formally, using his full Til'Igran name. `````~DO YOU HAVE THE KEY?~ `````"Nay, Guardian. You have the key, and will evermore." `````~DO YOU KNOW THE WAY?~ `````"Nay, Guardian. I am guided by the light of my Master, Lord Darimir." `````~THEN SHOW ME YOUR PROOF!~ `````Zevyr reached into his pocket and drew out a talisman bearing the symbols of the House of Oridai, the Malaphim glyph, and Darimir's personal sigil. It was said that the talismans were sealed with a Prince's magic so that Aranthil could be sure of its authenticity. Forging a fake talisman, or even possessing one was punishable by imprisonment between the Citadel Gates. If one was not in possession of and authentic talisman, or if one did not know the magical process to protect themselves when Aranthil made his rounds... `````The Citadel Guardian gazed at the talisman for several moments before the yellow orb winked out and the great tail came to a rest. Silently, a slab slid into the earth, revealing a dimly lit passageway where several voices echoed from further down. Zevyr passed underneath Aranthil and slipped into the corridor, holding the talisman aloft as he had been instructed. No sooner had Zevyr crossed the threshold than the stone slab slammed shut behind him with a bone-chilling thud. Faster than he could blink, the talisman burst into a ghostly-white flame that chilled his palm, rather than burning it. The light then played off of the polished stones of the corridor, giving the illusion of long-forgotten shades lurking just beneath the surface like sharks before a kill. `````Zevyr had traversed these corridors several times and knew that these specters were very real; foes of the Keeper that fought against Him and lost. Any fledgling Til'Igran that sought patronage of the House of Oridai was taken through this hall to give them over three thousand reasons to wait until the time was right before spilling the Keeper's blood. Many joined the House of Oridai for no other purpose than to be on the front lines, and the Elders spent many hours disciplining the ideas of glory and honor out of them. Zevyr had been an apt enough pupil, but many of his peers came away from the "training" with not a few more scars than he after trying to show the Elders "exactly what they were capable of," and more often not with just words. `````As if on cue, the specters launched themselves at Zevyr, slashing at his clothes and rending great gashes in the cloth, all the while wailing at him to join them. He paid them and their attacks no heed, striding forward confidently. Like distance and time in the Twilight Realms, appearance was merely an illusion, sustained by Will, so Zevyr waded through the torrent of destitute souls. After a while, Zevyr let the image of his mortal clothes fade in his mind and he began to glow. The tatters of his duster fell away to reveal a high-collared; dark green cloak decorated with superbly embroidered Malaphim glyph. His vest closed together, contorted and became a heavy tunic, Zevyr's personal sigil under Darimir's situated neatly just below his collar. Finally, his trusty Fali'sara, a sword especially designed for a House's din'shalar -- the "death bringer" as he was known among the Malaphim -- formed from his back. Zevyr shrugged his cloak into a more comfortable position on his shoulders and drew the cowl over his head as he neared the end of the corridor. As he closed the last few feet, another slab slid away and a multitude of lights flooded the corridor and a sad kind of relief washed over him as he stepped into his home…. `````The Citadel of Dreams and Til'Igris
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:23:36 GMT
Thus ends the first prologue of "The Final Gate." I am more than open to questions, comments, etc. I know there are plenty of unsolved things, but I will try and clear them up as the story moves on. Feel free to share this with anyone you know and trust. Prologue Two is still being ironed out, but is still in the works. Have no fear, it will be done within a week or so, and will be sent out after I type it out (when I find the time...).
Now, I know all of you vampire-lovers are saying, "What a damned bastard!" To that I say, "SO" Remember that this is Zevyr's profession and also he comes from a completely different world and frame of mind. He may eventually change, so never fear. Do you really think that I would use one main character to gack another?! Please, that is soooo not me.
Jas
Date: Wed, 22 Mar 2000 07:56:31 -0800 (PST) From: Hunter's Conclave <huntersconclave@yahoo.com> | Block address Subject: "The Final Gate," Prologue Two To: Jandar <root@warped.ndo.co.uk>, Suz Nahay <suzn25@hotmail.com>, Tiffany <wisher@whale-mail.com>, Sandy <mberry2953@msn.com>, Melissa <ms_trinket@yahoo.com> Add Addresses
To all my friends,
Sorry this one took so long, guys, but I had to calm down for a bit after a tragedy. This is actually my second time typing it. The first time, I was three paragraphs -- THREE FRIGGIN' PARAGRAPHS -- away from finishing the second part to the story when I got up to stretch my legs. Some young little punk zipped into my seat, thinking that I was done with my 'puter and minimized my window so that he could chat with his girlfriend! When I got my seat back, I restored the window to its full size to see a blank message screen! Argh, I was soooo pissed! Any who, let's get to the nitty-gritty. Feedback is appreciated, and so are any other messages you feel the need to send. So, without further ado, I give you the second installment of "The Final Gate". Enjoy!
NOTE: Indents are represented by "`````". Sorry! :-`
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`````Jandar Darkheart stood tall on a high mountain bluff overlooking an unnamed seacoast during the steel-grey of predawn, the wind buffeting his face and tossing his hair about. Behind him sat Ja'Shin R'Hjod, Jandar’s brother-in-arms and, quite possibly, his truest friend. Ja'Shin's eyes were closed in deep concentration, and his hands were clasped tightly in his lap, but a calm smile decorated his face. Jandar smirked darkly for a moment, then turned to the creeping light of morning. The two of them had always ventured out to this bluff whenever they could, a reminder that... `````Jandar's though was shattered when a deep red ball of light crested the rise, and Jandar's arms flew up in a vain effort to shield himself from the glow. Then he remembered that this was all an elaborate illusion sustained by Ja'Shin, and slowly, slowly faced the "sun" with growing confidence. `````"Realistic, eh," Ja'Shin asked happily, shifting slightly in his seat, and Jandar could only nod. `````What Jandar was seeing was a recreation of the sunrise Ja'Shin had seen several hours before their appointed meeting. Being a vampire himself -- unwillingly, yes, but a fact he had to live with -- Jandar was unable to see the beauty contained within the daylight hours and relied on Ja'Shin to be his eyes. Ja'Shin used the opportunity to practice his magical lessons -- "show off" was a better phrase -- and remind Ja'Shin of his humanity, so that each gained something from the experience. Jandar also saw it as a test of willpower. The first few times, Jandar has run screaming and sometimes attacked Ja'Shin until his friend was able to subdue him. Jandar and Ja'Shin were equal in fighting abilities as long as both kept their heads, and there was no clear victor between a frenzying vampire and a startled Divarian. There were a few times that each had been seriously hurt during the early sessions.
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Post by Admin on Feb 11, 2015 8:24:44 GMT
`````But with Ja'Shin's aid, Jandar had overcome the beast within, and incidents like that were few and far between. Jandar watched the "sunrise" until the illusionary golden disk was well above the horizon before turning to the other and sighing. `````"All right, Jas," he growled, trying to appear angry, "enough! I've got better things to do than watch you play." Ja'Shin opened his eyes and the illusion faded. The sun became the moon and day was consumed by night. `````"Especially today," Ja'Shin asked, the smile on his face only growing. `````Jandar nodded. "Yes. Especially today." `````This night held special meaning for Jandar, since it was this same night many years ago when Jandar's wife, Elizabeth, had mysteriously disappeared. Jandar never spoke much of her, but when he did, Ja'Shin saw in his friend's face the faint hope that she would return. Ja'Shin had been away during those years when they were together, but thankfully had returned after her disappearance when Jandar was suicidal. Ja'Shin had a few physical -- and not so few mental – scars from Jandar trying to hurt him enough so that Ja'Shin would leave him alone. Ja'Shin's resolve, devotion and talent had been one of the cornerstones of Jandar's recovery. `````Jandar and Ja'Shin walked in respectful silence along the coastline, up a woodland path, and ultimately to an abandoned cottage. Ja'Shin stopped several paces from the doorway, leaving his companion alone and devoted himself to keeping his friend protected during these proceedings. Jandar continued on, ducking under the decaying entryway and moving into, what used to be, the bedroom. Taking a blood-red rose from his cloak, he knelt, and placed it on the floor. Then he bowed his head and fell silent. After several moments, Jandar stood and walked out, nodding to Ja'Shin
`````After the cottage was out of sight and Jandar's mood lifted, Ja'Shin looked at his companion and broke the silence. `````"So," he said tentatively, "how did it all happen? You two meeting, I mean. I never heard the whole story." `````"Not much to tell." Jandar's eyes grew distant as he recalled those now-painful memories. "You know how it goes, boy meets girl-"
`````They had met in a tavern, of all places. He was looking for vampires to slay and she was a young woman in search of adventure. Jandar had word that one of the local lords was preying on villagers, especially women, and Elizabeth had been summoned by a lord to appear at his court. Jandar, never one to miss an opportunity, offered to be her bodyguard on the long, dark roads ahead. She accepted and their fates were sealed.
`````"-Boy falls in love with girl-"
`````Unfortunately, Jandar never found hard evidence against the lord to pin him as a vampire, so he remained in town, accompanying Elizabeth every time she was summoned to appear before him. They grew close and, as it tends to, love began to blossom.
`````"-Boy marries girl-"
`````After two years of observation, Jandar had found the hard evidence he needed, but he put the elimination of the vampire lord aside for making marriage plans. Finally, on a beautiful autumn day, they were joined.
`````"-Boy gets called away-"
`````Their honeymoon was cut short when Jandar received word that a large vampire group was slowly moving westward. Jandar left immediately and vowed to return soon.
`````"-Boy returns to his beloved-"
`````Jandar return to their cottage several months later to his wife, and after many hours of recounting events, they retired for the evening.
`````"-Boy and girl are happy-"
`````She attacked him in the middle of the night, clawing at him with savage fury, her eyes more feral than loving. Jandar fought back, but Elizabeth had changed. She lifted him off of the ground as if he were a rag doll and cast him against the wall. With inhuman speed she was on him again, pinning him against the wall by his shoulders. She bared long fangs and snarled before darting for his neck.
`````"-Girl disappears in the night."
`````Jandar fought on two fronts, one for consciousness and the other with himself. Should he slay the vampire, his enemy, and his wife, his love? His vision became blurred and his movements sluggish, the first sign of vampirism. Should he allow her to live and hope they can love in unlife? His mouth became dry and he felt unusually thirsty, the second sign. Jandar summoned up all of his strength and launched his attack, grabbing a stake from his belt, hanging nearby, and ramming it home into her heart. She convulsed once before exploding into a plume of dust. `````Jandar had saved his own life at the cost of another's, or so he thought.
`````Ja'Shin saw the tension etched into Jandar's face and decided to let the issue drop. Having lost his love and his home in the Frontier War, Ja'Shin knew what Jandar was going through. Since the fall of the Hunter's Conclave, the Divarian was never his old self, and subject to bouts of severe depression. Whenever Ja'Shin and Jandar were together, they seemed to feel off of each other's pain, and somehow grew stronger. This happened only after a long bout of insults and bickering, and even a good melee. Neither injured the other past bruises and scratched due to the fact that both combatants were seasoned fighters and knew how to pull blows. However, since Ja'Shin was the only one armed and armored at the moment, any fighting that happened this day would be purely hand-to-hand. Ja'Shin couldn't help but snicker; it seemed as if their entire relationship was based on arguing and fighting. `````"What's so funny, Jas," Jandar muttered, elbowing his friend in the ribs. `````"Us." Ja'Shin noticed the smirk on Jandar's face and prepared himself for anything. "Look at us, Jan. Two old fools kicking around life like we own it. I feel downright useless nowadays with all of the young blood bouncing around, and you are useless; all dark and brooding about everything." `````"You're coming up on, what, you six thousandth birthday within the next few weeks?" `````"Bite me," Ja'Shin grinned. "I'm only five hundred." `````"Now that you mention it," Jandar said brightly, fangs elongating, "I am a bit hungry." `````Ja'Shin chuckled wryly and offered an arm. Jandar smacked it away quickly. Divarians had a natural defense against vampires; being magically infused creatures, Divarian blood took to vampires like a dose of charcoal ingested by a human. Jandar's reaction to Ja'Shin's blood when they had first met had been mild, causing Jandar to retch for only an hour. The Divarian never quite understood how he was able to walk amongst the vampire population unmolested, but he always assumed that word got around. `````A deep-toned bell sang out thirteen times off to the south, and the two friends passed a confused look between them. `````"What was that," Ja'Shin growled. `````"The Bell of Vitae," Jandar replied glumly. "A signal to our kindred that a great danger is about the land. I need to go." `````"Right behind you." Ja'Shin was already glowing a sullen amber, a sign that he was about to use his magic. `````"No mortals, Jas." `````"Like hell I'm going to sit this one out! I got loyalties to uphold, ya know." Ja'Shin blurred into the form of a large white wolf and cast a daring look at Jandar before the golden aura faded. `````"No means no, Jas. True, the Bell calls for a truce among factions, but that does not mean that mortals are included. You may get hurt if you attend." `````"So? If they ask about me, say that I'm your snack for the proceedings." Jandar could only gag as he turned his path southward.
`````The two arrived at the Temple of Midnight shortly after the Bell of Vitae chimed again. Ja'Shin and Jandar fell into the slow-moving train of bodies that wound down the north face of a mountain pass and ultimately into a long, snaking tunnel. As each vampire crossed the threshold of the tunnel, black tendrils of shadow encased each one in order to maintain anonymity. Within the Temple, all were equals and the veil of darkness denied any heated conversations from being taken outside to the physical level. Ja'Shin used his magic to draw the shadows about himself, as the form of a wolf made his muscles cramp up, and joined the mass flowing into the audience hall. `````The Temple of Midnight itself was a bowl of black marble into which tier upon tier had been carved. At the base of the bowl, each Prince -- or Princess, as some Clans had -- sat on a small throne bearing the symbol of their faction on its back. In the center of the thrones was a high dais where the Speaker stood, a dark figure dressed in flowing, blood red robes. As with tradition, the Speaker wore a white mask; its only distinguishing marks were the gaping, snake-like mouth with elongated fangs, and the inverted crimson triangles beneath each eyehole. As everyone was seated, the Speaker rapped a gnarled oak staff on the ground sharply, calling the group to order. `````"For centuries," the Speaker intoned, "we vampires have been secreting ourselves amongst the mortals, trying to maintain and empire forged many years before us. The goal of that empire has been nothing less than the total dominion over the mortals. For centuries, we vampires have played a game of chess; moving pawns forward and securing power in an attempt to reach that goal, and for centuries, we have failed. `````"This has been caused due to a growing amount of discord within the Clans. Some of our kind have been working alongside our prey, and there are those of us who actively seek out and destroy our brethren for revenge." A low rumble reverberated throughout the chamber as many vampires growled at that fact. `````"I feel your anger, my brothers and sisters, but I bear even graver news: a vampire hunter is slowly destroying us Clan by Clan." `````"Surely you can't be saying that a mere mortal is giving our kind enough trouble to require us here," one form called down. `````"Out of order," the Speaker mused, "but no less a valid question. True, were it a mortal, the Bell of Vitae would not have been sounded, but we are not dealing with a mortal. The floor will now recognize Lord Balzemier, one of the only ones of us to survive the Hunter's attacks. Lord Balzemier to the dais, please." `````A subtle murmur flowed through the Temple as a charred and misshapen form clad in a well-tailored suit mounted the dais. Prince Balzemier had been considered by many to have been a handsome, if not dashing, figure, but the creature that now stood next to the Speaker could only be called hideous at best. Balzemier stood hunched over slightly, his flesh crawling visibly as it worked to heal itself at an accelerated rate. His taloned hands hung weakly at his side, the nails long and twisted. Balzemier's face was frozen in a scowl of concentration, and as he spoke, his voice shifted between strained and tortured. `````"Fellow vampires," he began, scanning the room with his shrewd eyes, "indeed the thing that did this to me was no mere mortal. My attacker was a creature from beyond the Realm; a demonic killer that has no equal on this plane. Indeed, only through my luck and cunning was I able to survive."
`````"Whatever," someone yelled. "You probably were scared by a rabbit and stumbled into the sun. You're only calling this meeting to save your reputation and pride." `````"Perhaps," Balzemier admitted, stretching his hand toward the speaker. The unfortunate individual rose several feet from the ground, clutching his chest and writhing in pain. After a moment of high-pitched screaming, the floating vampire exploded in a shower of blood that flowed down into Balzemier's mouth. The body hit the floor with a final-sounding thump. "But then again, you will never know now, will you?" `````"Now," Balzemier said brightly, his body suddenly healthy again, "I trust that there will be no further interruptions? Good! Let's move on, shall we?" `````Balzemier paced about the dais for a moment. `````"This creature parades about this Realm as a human under the name of Zevyr Darim, and I assure you that he is no pushover. However, he hails from a shadowed reality that was beyond our reach until a few days ago. One of our numbers uncovered an artifact that would allow one of our kind to traverse the barrier between this reality and the next. Through our efforts, we have been able to duplicate the artifact. We intend to send three volunteers across the barrier to locate Zevyr and destroy him. I have been notified by Princess Alyianna of the Shadow family that Tiara Darkstone has already volunteered. I need two more brave...shall we say...souls to aid me." `````Ja'Shin nudged Jandar, and Jandar's hand shot up reluctantly. Balzemier nodded and called out for another. `````"Why me," Jandar muttered, glaring at Ja'Shin. `````"Simple, bro," Ja'Shin grinned. "Tia's my friend, but I can't go to help, as I'm no blood-sucker. That leaves you, ya lucky bum!" `````"You owe me big for this one, pleb!" `````"Deal. 'Sides, you're already picked, bud. Too bad I'm not a vampire, eh, Jan?" `````"I can fix that," Jandar growled darkly. `````"Drink?" Ja'Shin proffered his wrist yet again, but it was slapped away. `````"Shut up and go 'way!" `````"Anyway, something about his story doesn't ring true." `````"Oh?" Jandar turned his glare back to the other. `````"Just a hunch." Ja'Shin replied. `````"Next time you have a hunch, let me know so that I have ample time to beat you!" `````Ja'Shin chuckled and escorted Jandar down to the dais where Tiara and the other volunteer were waiting.
`````Jandar and his companions mounted the dais, coming upon -- what Ja'Shin had aptly named -- "the Darkling family." Tiara Darkstone, a raven-haired woman of lithe, supple grace from beyond the Northern Reaches stood next to Ri'Ind Ti'Shan, her long-time lover and ex-Master of the Hunter's Conclave. As usual, she wore a loose-fitting, light brown bodice with a daring neckline and a snug pair of breeches of similar hue. About her waist sat a thick leather belt from which hung two strangely curved daggers only slightly shorter than her forearms, like canine teeth of some fierce predator. A pair of smaller throwing daggers sat at the tops of her boots, ready to be used, and she absently maneuvered an ornate knife from finger to finger. Ri'Ind, swathed all in black seemed to watch everything at once and appeared to be Tiara's shadow given form. `````Beyond those two, Timber Darksbane conversed quietly with her husband, Dinin. Timber's warm smile was mirrored on her lover's face as they talked, if only more dark and sinister. Her deep red hair almost matched the color of Dinin's cloak, which was the hue of dried blood, and cascaded neatly down her back like a ruby waterfall. She was clad in a neat blue dress, which reflected off of her emerald eyes, as would a sea at twilight. Like Tiara, she was armed with an ornate dagger that hung neatly at her side. As Jandar and his counterpart stepped into the ring of light, Dinin politely broke away from his chat and approached Ja'Shin. `````Darkheart, Darkstone, and Darksbane; a diverse group bearing a common root in name. With all assembled, the refreshed and restored Balzemier stepped from the shadows, flanked by the Speaker and another man who muttered to himself, nodding every now and then. The volunteers and their companions formed a semicircle in front of Balzemier as the Prince began to speak. His words were calm and his tone low, but an air of command was nestled within. `````"Thank you all for accepting this dangerous, yet necessary task of eliminating this threat to our kind. Successful or not, your bravery will be remembered throughout history. `````"Now, to put aside the pleasantries, I have brought with me my brother," Balzemier motioned to the other man, who was still muttering, "Kenzir, to be your guide to and from the nether realm from which Zevyr hails. He can give you valuable information about customs, organizations, and the basic 'do's' and 'don'ts'" `````Balzemier hefted three talismans marked with alien glyphs and handed one to Jandar, Tiara and Timber. `````"These artifacts will endow you with the ability to traverse the barrier between our reality and his. However, once you pass through the Gate into the other reality, you must return to the same Gate in order to come up this reality again. Counter to that, you must only will yourself to cross from this reality to the other, regardless of location. We have yet to be able to explain it. `````"I have stated all that you need to know at this time. My Lord and Master has informed me of little more on this matter, so you are not the only ones in the dark, so to speak. Kenzir, you have your instructions. All of you are dismissed." `````Kenzir seemed to snap out of his trance and nodded to Balzemier. Without another word, Kenzir reached into the front of his black tunic and drew out a more battered version of the strange talisman -- most likely, Jandar thought, the original. Kenzir seemed to stretch out for a brief second before his form snapped together into a tight glowing line of hot crimson and dissolving. Concentrating on the talisman, Jandar felt a peculiar lurch before the world went black.
`````When the last of the volunteers had vanished and their friends had left, Balzemier turned to the Speaker and grinned evilly. `````"So, Master Vanador," he crooned, "what do you think of it all?" `````"The hounds have been set loose. All that remains now is to see if they flush the prey or are taken by it. One way or another, my son, we shall have Zevyr'aluti'ba'darim, and three lives are a small trade." `````Balzemier nodded, a dark sneer climbing onto his face like a maniacal mask. "Well put, my master. Well put, indeed."
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And thus ends another section to the vast tale that there is to tell. What further mysteries will be revealed next time?
All right, so I sound like a light-blasted soap opera with those lines, but oh well. Some have made the comment that this is very World of Darkness, and to that I only have this to say: it is my own creation, true as life and honest as rain. Since much of what goes on within the Tavern and other parts of the Realm are based on the WoD, I had to tread softly when writing this part of the story. The first prologue was mostly written from Zevyr's perspective, so the terminology was easy. Not so with this section. "Kindred" and other such references are nowadays associated with White Wolf that any other time you use it, someone always has to yell "plagiarist!"
Comments and questions (even a suggestion or two) are always appreciated, and those who do not understand certain parts of the story, or would like to learn more need only say so. I see feedback as a way to refine my "art" and make it more enveloping.
Also, I'd like to apologize if I did not represent your character correctly, did not dress him/her as you had, or armed them differently than you intended. One thing I did not regret changing is the typical Goth "black hair, pale-skinned, wan-looking" vampire archetype. Too many of those out there have those traits and it’s uneven. For some it fits, others it doesn't. I have depicted the features of the characters as I have imagined them. If there are those that want to refresh my memory as to what the character is armed with or looks like, be my guest. To those who already have, I remember well, but may keep what is written.
Until next time, kiddies!
Jas
P.S.: Just for fun (if it worked) I have included the Malaphim glyph that I whipped up for the RPG. If anyone would like to join up with me and help me create this, they are more than welcome to do so. I desperately need people I can trust, and writing a whole world down -- to the tiniest detail -- is rough, and setting it in order is tougher. Ciao!
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